From b13a688ea816bd93519fd08043aab6b6859f21b9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meejah Date: Thu, 1 Oct 2020 19:21:09 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] better words --- docs/proposed/grid-manager/managed-grid.rst | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/proposed/grid-manager/managed-grid.rst b/docs/proposed/grid-manager/managed-grid.rst index ff4b6e5c4..8d584e71d 100644 --- a/docs/proposed/grid-manager/managed-grid.rst +++ b/docs/proposed/grid-manager/managed-grid.rst @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ the statement: "Grid Manager X suggests you use storage-server Y to upload shares to" (X and Y are public-keys). Such a certificate consists of: - - a version (currently 1) + - a version - the public-key of a storage-server - an expiry timestamp - a signature of the above @@ -61,10 +61,10 @@ at which time you may be able to pass a directory-capability to this option). If you don't want to store the configuration on disk at all, you may -use ``--config -`` (that's a dash) and write a valid JSON -configuration to stdin. +use ``--config -`` (the last character is a dash) and write a valid +JSON configuration to stdin. -All commands require the ``--config`` option, and they all behave +All commands require the ``--config`` option and they all behave similarly for "data from stdin" versus "data from disk". @@ -144,11 +144,11 @@ tahoe admin add-grid-manager-cert - `--filename`: the file to read the cert from (default: stdin) - `--name`: the name of this certificate (default: "default") -Import a "version 1" storage-certificate produced by a grid-manager -(probably: a storage server may have zero or more such certificates -installed; for now just one is sufficient). You will have to re-start -your node after this. Subsequent announcements to the Introducer will -include this certificate. +Import a "version 1" storage-certificate produced by a grid-manager A +storage server may have zero or more such certificates installed; for +now just one is sufficient. You will have to re-start your node after +this. Subsequent announcements to the Introducer will include this +certificate. .. note::