diff --git a/newsfragments/3926.incompat b/newsfragments/3926.incompat
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-Record both the PID and the process creation-time
+Record both the PID and the process creation-time:
 
-A new kind of pidfile in `running.process` records both
+a new kind of pidfile in `running.process` records both
 the PID and the creation-time of the process. This facilitates
 automatic discovery of a "stale" pidfile that points to a
 currently-running process. If the recorded creation-time matches
 the creation-time of the running process, then it is a still-running
-`tahoe run` proecss. Otherwise, the file is stale.
+`tahoe run` process. Otherwise, the file is stale.
 
 The `twistd.pid` file is no longer present.
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