diff --git a/docs/source/design/float/decisions/e2e-encryption.md b/docs/source/design/float/decisions/e2e-encryption.md index cecc8af96f..0cf51847de 100644 --- a/docs/source/design/float/decisions/e2e-encryption.md +++ b/docs/source/design/float/decisions/e2e-encryption.md @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ End-to-end encryption is a desirable potential design feature for the [float](.. #### Disadvantages -1. With no placeholder, it is very hard to add support later and maintainwire stability. +1. With no placeholder, it is very hard to add support later and maintain wire stability. 2. May not get past security reviews of Float. ### 2. Placeholder only @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ End-to-end encryption is a desirable potential design feature for the [float](.. #### Advantages 1. Allows wire stability when we have agreed an encrypted approach -2. Shows that we are serious about security, even if this isn’tavailable yet. -3. Allows later encrypted version to be an enterprise feature thatcan interoperate with OS versions. +2. Shows that we are serious about security, even if this isn’t available yet. +3. Allows later encrypted version to be an enterprise feature that can interoperate with OS versions. #### Disadvantages @@ -53,4 +53,4 @@ Proceed with Option 2: Placeholder ## Decision taken -Decision still required. \ No newline at end of file +Decision still required.