diff --git a/snap/snapcraft.yaml b/snap/snapcraft.yaml
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--- a/snap/snapcraft.yaml
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@@ -1,14 +1,27 @@
 name: zerotier
-summary: ZeroTier is a software-based managed Ethernet switch for planet Earth.
+summary: Securely connect any device, anywhere.
 description: |
-  It erases the LAN/WAN distinction and makes VPNs, tunnels, proxies, and other kludges arising from the inflexible nature of physical networks obsolete. Everything is encrypted end-to-end and traffic takes the most direct (peer to peer) path available.
-  This snap contains ZeroTier One, a service that provides ZeroTier network connectivity and makes joining virtual networks as easy as joining IRC or Slack channels.
-  Visit ZeroTier's site for more information and pre-built binary packages. Apps for Android and iOS are available for free in the Google Play and Apple app stores.
+
+  ZeroTier is a software-based managed Ethernet switch for planet Earth. Use it to connect your
+  desktop clients, servers, phones, NAS, or even individual applications (using our SDK).
+
+  This snap contains ZeroTier One, a service that provides ZeroTier network connectivity and
+  makes joining virtual networks as easy as joining IRC or Slack channels. Apps for Android
+  and iOS are available for free in the Google Play and Apple app stores.
+
+  ZeroTier eliminates the LAN/WAN distinction and makes VPNs, tunnels, proxies, and other kludges
+  arising from the inflexible nature of physical networks obsolete. Everything is encrypted
+  end-to-end and traffic takes the most direct (peer to peer) path available.
+
   Install
+
     sudo snap install zerotier
+
   Join your network
+
     sudo zerotier join <nwid>
     sudo zerotier status
+
   Approve your new node in ZeroTier Central (https://my.zerotier.com)! Welcome online!
 
 adopt-info: one